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Xmen K-Mart Critique pls by lady-cybercat Xmen K-Mart Critique pls by lady-cybercat
Ok after seeing the AMAZING freaking job Anathemasremedy did on her Hogwarts piece i was inspired to try to do something similar. I've never been good at multiple subjects or at doing things with distances so I figured why not. It's obviously not done yet, I'm baaadd at humans so I thought I'd let you folks help me make this as good as it can get. Soo see something wrong with this? Think I should change something? Too big? too small whatever, nitpic it to death so I can fix it up before I do the final pencils and inks. Thanks guys!!
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sephypsycologist Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I love this. I really like Kurt and Remy's faces and their poses too. Logan...he just can't have fun, can he? :giggle: CAN'T DRAW HUMANS?!?! you want to see not drawing humans, look at about 86% of the people on DA including me, not at this! You did over fabulous on this.
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fairypower Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2010
Where did this "I can't draw humans" nonsense come from? It was so good that I didn't even notice the girl's uneven face of slanted counter top until after I read all of the other critque. All in all the size and porportions are correct. You have awesome spacing. Above all else I couldn't help but notice that you did an excellent job with the hands which are the most difficult to draw. Especially when holding onto bags or put into fists.
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dracostarhome Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2009
very nicely done ^_^
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Meena-Tsukino344 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2009
I THINK YOU'VEE DONE FREAKING AWESOME!!!! ^________^
I know it's not exactly what you wanted to hear but yeah! ^_^ hope you have fun doing the inking and coloring! ^_^
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RainbowGloStix Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2009
youve got all my favorite men, kurt, jono, remy, and logan! and u need is hank [beast]. i love this! great job
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Steampunk-Girl Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2005
I don't see anything wrong with the humans O.O In fact, I think you made agreat job in the male anatomy ;) specially Logan's ( his arms look really solid, and his chest wide enough to show toughness ) and the rest ones look really good too.the only thing I see is the girl's face, her chin is a bit long, maybe like if she was squashed. And the table perspectibe look a bit strange, but, I can't draw perspective tables myself, so blegh...
Anywhoo, extremely good piece, gurl! ;) keep it up!
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lady-cybercat Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2005  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks =) I'll try. I hope to get inspiration to finish this some time =P
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Ludi-Price Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
Dammit, I can't wait for you to finish this! I must :+fav: it!!! That Gambit is too scrumplicious!!! :drool: :love:
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kokoro Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2004
Wonderful job! I love your style ^^ :+fav:
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VampiricatMidnight Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2004
question....whos the dude with the bandageson his mouth?
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