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Xmen K-Mart Critique pls by lady-cybercat Xmen K-Mart Critique pls by lady-cybercat
Ok after seeing the AMAZING freaking job Anathemasremedy did on her Hogwarts piece i was inspired to try to do something similar. I've never been good at multiple subjects or at doing things with distances so I figured why not. It's obviously not done yet, I'm baaadd at humans so I thought I'd let you folks help me make this as good as it can get. Soo see something wrong with this? Think I should change something? Too big? too small whatever, nitpic it to death so I can fix it up before I do the final pencils and inks. Thanks guys!!
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sephypsycologist Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I love this. I really like Kurt and Remy's faces and their poses too. Logan...he just can't have fun, can he? :giggle: CAN'T DRAW HUMANS?!?! you want to see not drawing humans, look at about 86% of the people on DA including me, not at this! You did over fabulous on this.
fairypower Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2010
Where did this "I can't draw humans" nonsense come from? It was so good that I didn't even notice the girl's uneven face of slanted counter top until after I read all of the other critque. All in all the size and porportions are correct. You have awesome spacing. Above all else I couldn't help but notice that you did an excellent job with the hands which are the most difficult to draw. Especially when holding onto bags or put into fists.
dracostarhome Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2009
very nicely done ^_^
Meena-Tsukino344 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2009
I know it's not exactly what you wanted to hear but yeah! ^_^ hope you have fun doing the inking and coloring! ^_^
RainbowGloStix Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2009
youve got all my favorite men, kurt, jono, remy, and logan! and u need is hank [beast]. i love this! great job
Steampunk-Girl Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2005
I don't see anything wrong with the humans O.O In fact, I think you made agreat job in the male anatomy ;) specially Logan's ( his arms look really solid, and his chest wide enough to show toughness ) and the rest ones look really good too.the only thing I see is the girl's face, her chin is a bit long, maybe like if she was squashed. And the table perspectibe look a bit strange, but, I can't draw perspective tables myself, so blegh...
Anywhoo, extremely good piece, gurl! ;) keep it up!
lady-cybercat Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2005  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks =) I'll try. I hope to get inspiration to finish this some time =P
Ludi-Price Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
Dammit, I can't wait for you to finish this! I must :+fav: it!!! That Gambit is too scrumplicious!!! :drool: :love:
kokoro Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2004
Wonderful job! I love your style ^^ :+fav:
VampiricatMidnight Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2004
question....whos the dude with the bandageson his mouth?
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